My first novella, verdus 13

[Gapey]

It probably has better formatting than a .txt

If that’s the case then it could just be a pdf doebeit
Anyways I’m archiving it right now so I can read it without goygle datamining

 

[Gem Control]

If that’s the case then it could just be a pdf doebeit
Anyways I’m archiving it right now so I can read it without goygle datamining

converting it is extra steps OP probably didn’t think about. Also you can just use a browser/extension that blocks the ‘mining albeit.

 

[basil]

what does versus mean

 

[centurywalker]

what does versus mean

it came from the name of final fantasy versus 13

 

[centurywalker]

I just don't give a fuck

Jesus why do i think about the jartycuck song

 

[USL]

verdus

Chapter 1 Expungement It was 20:30 PM in Salem, Massachusetts,a pretty quiet town right now. He had finished working and was already home then doing his laundry, eating, then after that cleaning the plate, brushing his teeth, setting his bed and then going to sleep. All of these are all done af...

docs.google.com

any updates?

 

[centurywalker]

Not yet finished the chaptee

 

[centurywalker]

any updates?

It’s a small one actually, you could look into chapter 4

 

[centurywalker]

how is it

 

[centurywalker]

@baqqrih

 

[USL]

You still need to work on run on sentences and grammar. It's clearly better and I can follow whats going on now, but the way it's written is still unpleasant. It doesn't matter if the story itself is gold if the writing is painful to read. I'm not trying to shit on you, if I didn't give a shit, I'd just never read it. Many books require dozens of drafts. Again, I suggest getting some text to speech type program and have it read your story to back to you. If the wording sounds strange, fix it.

 

[centurywalker]

@chudnater2

 

[centurywalker]

@WeegeeWarrior
What do you think

 

[WeegeeWarrior]

Where are the pictures? I cant read this shit. Cool tho